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i walk by and watch his eyes follow every inch of me until i take my cold, hard seat that i was almost sure had been spit upon. he takes his hat off slowly and itches his dirty, greasy hair. "you look like hell" he says.

   "you do too."

God had appearantly been depressed, he hadn't showered in what smelled like a couple of days. his lips were stained a slight pale yellow from the excessive amounts of cigarettes he'd been smoking. "Smoking is bad for you, you know" , i said.

   "Kalea, don't tell me what is bad for me."

i had become a little irriatated with God, every question i asked him, came back with a heavily full reply. his old, tired hands were covered in scars, and bruises. he told me these had been from mistakes made when creating people, and lives, and earth.

   I guess it's true that some wounds will never heal.

i sat staring straight ahead, aware that God knew every. little. thing. about me. "Do you believe in me, Kalea?" my lips were bloody and chapped from biting them, and i brought a hand up to them, i nervously picked at the skin.

   "Sometimes."

"I believed in me once." God bent down to tie his shoe, and i noticed a picture in the back of his pocket, frayed and obviously looked over many times. "Who's that?" , i continued picking at my raw lip.

  he handed me a kleenex.

"Her name is Tina, and she will be killed by this bus, at exactly 2:33 p.m." I turned immediately towards him, and grabbed his hand. God looked out the window, and tears ran down his face. "Are you going to stop it?" i felt the tears sting at the sides of my lips.

   "i just need people to believe in me, Kalea."

Tina stopped at the cross walk and gripped her mother's hand.

   it's 2:31 p.m.
This thought has been bothering me for quite some time these past weeks.


The Day I Met God II: [link]

The Day I Met God I:[link]
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CallieFink Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my... just WOW! phenominal!! :faint:
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create-illusions Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
thank you dear :hug:
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shadowhunter144 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009  Student General Artist
Its soo amazing i can even say breathtaking....WoW~
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create-illusions Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009
thanky ou!
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kimby05 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
WOW! This was absolutley amazing!
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create-illusions Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
Oh, thank you:hug:
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kimby05 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
You're very welcome=D
~Kimberly
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FollowMeBackHome Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
this is so frightening. and yet so unbelievably beautiful.
i'd give you advanced critique, but i have nothing of that. i think it's flawless. and better.
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create-illusions Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
Thankyou!:)
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hidden-adrenaline Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009
Wow, I love this!!! I also read the other two and I love them too! :D
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