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try brushing that in the morning.



anyway, i cannot tell you how excited i am for my dearest lucy to return so that i may experience all of this creativity buzzing around in my head!

i also have some things booked through modelmayhem, but i don't know how to feel about it, from some i've heard there is a lot of flakes, others i've heard absolutely adore it...

so we'll see how that goes..
:heart::peace:


- taken the same time as : Pale

Critiques


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I like this photo much more than your previous one "pale", although I must say I am a sucker for black and white photography, especially portraits.
But here the image is particularly good. The depth of the photo is wonderful, I love the deep blacks combined with the very bright raised areas, it gives the photo a lot of emotion and makes the image more real, where less shadows might make the image flat.
Also the framing is perfect, you have centered the face exactly, and while in some cases this can make the image seem less professional, here it does the opposite, you have used the hair as its own frame, so that there is a frame within a frame, which adds even more depth tio the picture.
You have also managed to capture a very complex emotion on your face, somewhere between slight fear and anticipation which, combined with the fact that you are looking off the page, makes the viewer wonder what you are looking at and allows them to use their imagination.
Overall this is a wonderfully framed very well taken photo.
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:iconxlemonblueberryx:
You have such pretty hair!
[maybe I say that 'cause mine is the same]

I cut mine though, & now I praying it'll grow back soon...it screwed up my curls to the point where they're kinky instead of ringlet-y =/
:iconkurokyohaku:
This is faboosh.

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:icondancer333:
I love the curls!! You look absolutly gorgeous!!

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"That girl, that you want, well she was tearing us apart. Cuz she's everything, everything I'm not."
:iconwhimsical-soul:
The expression is very pinup and doll-like, and the soft curls give it a nice touch. If you had smoothed and pearled the skin a bit and had worn a bit of a darker lip color, this would be wonderful.

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:iconlabmixz:
beautiful, love your facial expressions.

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:iconraychello:
You should do your hair like this all the time! I love it.

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:iconneonninjarawr:
absolutely stunning! i love your expression and the eye lashes! Looks very elegant, looks kinda 40's glamor to me as well.

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:iconcrusader333:
Weee, so pretty!

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Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XSi
1/32 second
F/3.5
18 mm
200
Jul 5, 2009, 4:36:49 AM

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