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he has lightening bolt eyes and one fucking killer smile.

   let me introduce you to whom i call "fire-fly."

he has ice white skin and something about the way his hair falls that makes me wish mine would conform to such a beauty.

   looking at you for so long makes me feel. Really feel.

he calls them fire-flies but i say lightening bugs.
fire burns hot against his skin, and i can feel the heat in his heart
but lightening bolt eyes can destroy you.

   but god, it's so beautiful first, but only at first.

he calls me his "freckled girl" and i call him my heart
and he says that i shine underneath the sun
like it was made for me, and only me

   but he has telescope eyes, and those can see to the stars.

he has razor blade hip bones and they stab into me while i dream
lightening bolt eyes and freckles like stars
and in my bed at midnight is the perfect galaxy

   and for a second we make one constellation

                    (and we both shine like fire-flies, and people look at us with telescope eyes)
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and telescope eyes see to the stars.
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reni-girl144 Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your way of writting really captures my attention and I love reading it, just like I loved reading this piece (=
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:iconlicoricefactory:
oh gosh...that was beautiful. that hip bone part got me. i was really imagining sharp hip bones that look like knives of some sort while i read that line. it was beautiful.
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:iconcreate-illusions:
thank you very much
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:icononelonelyday:
This is so brilliantly written.
It's wonderful.
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ChocolateAddiction Apr 29, 2009
:heart: gorgeous :heart:
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xxdominoe Apr 27, 2009
your words are magnificent
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