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it's twenty degrees outside, and when he breathes into the air, the smoke spells sex.

   but not the loving kind, the kind where taking a shower just isn't enough to get the smell of him off of me.

he's all wrapped up into disney movie, magic shit. when i know that he is just some dirty subliminal message, and i'll get sucked in.(but i'll tell myself it's not my fault, because my sub-conscious should be more aware, and i'll pinch myself to make sure i'm sleeping.)

                  i know that's not right. (anything to keep me asleep)

if and when he holds my hand he squeezes 3 times, and that means "i love you." and i am aware that i should squeeze back 3 times because that is just courteous to do. but for some reason i squeeze once, and that just means, "okay."  

    (there is this part of me that wishes my subconscious could catch onto bullshit, and i'd shove all the messages into a jar and make you eat the words you bury into my brain.)

it's the mistakes about you that are my favorite, your freckles and the gap between your two front teeth(you should have got that fixed). mostly it's the imperfect way i am reflected into your eyes, my face is all distorted, and my mouth is crooked, and bent.

   (because you see me the way i really am, and no subliminal message can ever screw you into thinking anything different.)
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RiparianVeins Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2009  Hobbyist
this was deliciously different, haha. i think i've fallen in love with your words P=.
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create-illusions Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2009
thank you:)
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beautiful-shadows Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
I like how you respond to every comment!!! I just read your poem about William. I love your style babe. Your magnifecent. You should most definately write more, but your photographs are beautiful, too.
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create-illusions Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
oh, well thank you very much:heart:
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beautiful-shadows Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
Your very welcome Darling.
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aramak Featured By Owner May 14, 2009
Wow, I really like this.
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create-illusions Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
I'm glad:hug:
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Casey-Wirrwarr Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
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You are an amazing writer.
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create-illusions Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
thank you!
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Casey-Wirrwarr Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
you're welcome. ^__^
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