I watched you destroy by destroy, i mean explode and exploding is the easy way out. I'd rather burst into flames, the heroic way. i made a puzzle out of our faces i glued it together, i could never put your eyes together nothing ever fit there was always a speck of something reflecting in the pupil. but it was never me. i'd hold your hand but you told me holding onto someone was needy "you hold onto life" i said, or did you? i picked up your favorite marble and threw it across the room i watched you sit there, and stare at it rolling farther and farther away i watched you let it go you'd let me go, but no one would have to throw me. smiles are for happy people moments are for people worth remembering puzzles are for people with too much time reflections are for people who you want to see. but it was never me. |
Author's Comments i'd throw you, if that makes you feel better. Comments you're an amazing poet too? sheesh. imagery and wording is beautiful. the first stanza made me go insane. :]
-- if faith is all we've got, than we must have a lot.  love the marble part! <3
you remind me of miss deathwish both beautiful poets (: -- Living might mean taking chances But they're worth taking Lovin' might be a mistake But it's worth making  lovely!!! ^^
-- "When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the world wondering how the hell you did it"  Fantastic imagery, I also loved the part about the marble, made me stop and think.
-- "I thought it would be nice to lie down and close my eyes, It never occurred to me that I am already asleep" -Trapt: Enigma  Manipulation Account: ~XxsacredXdreamsxX Group Account: ~Prelude2TheFinaleXx    -- ---- [...a secret was concealed.] it rose like thunder, clapped under our hands! it s t r e t c h e d for centuries to a diary entry's end; where i wrote: you make me happy when skies are grey.  wow... this left me speechless!
i LOVE it. it's so.. accurate.  -- We're busting out of this Ghost town baby.  i love it <3
 your poems are so so good.
i love how you leave a line kind of seperate from the stanza to like clear everything up i love love LOVE IT! -- girl can we chill talk about leaving together sure we will  very emotional. great job
-- ========================================== The body is a masterpiece show it to the world ^_^ |
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